Editing, Really effective, but goes on a bit too long , need to cut the end of the sequence shorter.
Examples of good editing was:- Mel looking into the bag.- When the guy gets shot.
Camera work,very good variety of shots. Steady shots.
Example of camera work is: point of view shot, when character is looking up at gun.
Sound, The music at the start was very good, created suspense, the music needs to be prolonged over the rest of the film. Need to get rid of the some of the laughing.
Miss en Scene, Outfits are really good with the balaclavas. good diegetic noises e.g snaping twigs, rustling leaves, gun noises. good setting, in the forest- not quite sure why the girl would be hovering around by herself.
Good suspense with opening the bag, whats inside?
Train going past in one shot ruins it. Props look very realistic.
Narrative- quick cuts, web of intrigue, why is she walking in the forest.