Can you describe what happens in our thriller?
-A girl finds something that must be important , she takes it and hides. Another, looks for that thing and sees that it is stolen, turns on the other guy perhaps thinking he is the one that stole the thing. The girl just looks on.
Which one shot would you remove and why?
-The end shot would be more effective to end the sequence, the use of special effects with the blood transition is very powerful!